Final Cut Feedback (Editing)

the feedback i got for the final cut was majoritally positive. It was said the black and white was seen as good editing and was appropriate to the film, the voice over fit into the film well and the last shot was said to be impressive. On the other hand it was suggested to take off the words at the end of the film and to enlarge the logo as it was a bit to small. I did not use a shattering font in the titles like it was suggested in the rough cut feedback as the options available were limited and to fantasy like. I took all of this into consideration and then made all the appropriate