Editing rough cut:
To make sure that we create a product of a high standard, we decided to get some final audience feedback. One of the things that was suggested was that the second shot (of the camera moving towards the female character) looked amateurish. This was deliberate to what we wanted to portray - a faux-naif effect to convey the character as naive and innocent (similarly to the hand held camera). So we counter-balanced the audiences view and our aims by removing the ambient sound (which was increased in speed), by doing this, it comprimised the audiences and groups views into something we believe has improved our product. We were also trying to incoporate appropriate conventions of romance genres by creating a similarity to '500 Days Of Summer'.
Additionally, a minor mistake pointed out was that 'starring' was spelt incorrectly, which we most definatly needed to change in order to avoid an amateur profile.
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