As a group we decided that it would be a good idea to put a piece of narration at the end of the production to show that it is being left open and that there is more to come after. To create a cliff hanger. This is what we wrote down:
1) That's when it all begun
Gradually, the tide crept up on us and swept across my mind.
2) And that's when it all began
Crept up on us like a wave, gradual but persistent, eventually moving over my mind like the water over an unprotected sea bed.
3) And that's when it all began
Crept up on us like a wave, gradual but persistent, inevitable and powerful, eroding our happy lives.
This is the narration that we finally decided on:
This is when it hit us, like a wave, gradual but persistent, inevitable and powerful, eroding our happy lives.
Good team work with some great language that will form an effective voiceover.
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